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Jul 16, 2015
Sheryl Kiklas
All-World Travel Agency
440 East Broadway
New York, NY 10014
Dear Ms. Kiklas:
Carnival is pleased with the faithfulness of your company. We promote fun at the sea and pitching, discos on-board, swimming, and parties for all kind of costumers. We are confident that our cruises are the most attractive in the world. We have over a million people a year from all over the world. Close to 98 percent of our guests they get satisfied.
Because certain Travel agents have complaints of “drunken and loud behavior” of some teenagers; my company has increased the limit age of drinking from 18 to 21. Also, no teenager under 21 may travel unless accompanied by an adult over 25. We are hope that all our customers will be pleased with our service.
Our company would like to continue in business focusing more in family packages than in students. We will continue having fun cruises, sunny trips and will go to exotic ports that will remove the stresses of everyday life for our costumers.
I will call you during the week of January 5th to help you plan special family tour packages.
Sincerely,
Jose Manuel Hernandez
Customer Service
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