Feliz año 2017

Felicitar a todos un feliz año. Espero que vuestros sueños se cumplan.

Ejemplo otra carta de presentación

¿Podéis encontrar las diferencias entre la carta de presentación de ayer y la carta de presentación de hoy? Las dos son para diferentes tipos de trabajo pero la forma de escribir es muy parecida.

Jan-5-13


José Manuel Hernández González
4125 N. 3250 W.
Lehi, UT 84109

To whom it might concern:

I’m a Masters student at Brigham Young University. I’m completing a Masters in Hispanic Linguistics. Right now I’m working on my thesis so that I can defend it this summer. I came across your job posting in the Internet, and I’m very interested in working as a Latin teacher at your school.

I completed my Bachelors in Classical Studies and Latin Teaching with a Minor in Spanish Teaching at Brigham Young University in 2011. Also, I completed my Student Teaching requirements at Maeser Preparatory in Lindon, where I taught seven and eight grade Latin and Spanish classes.

I’m very interested to work developing a new program. In fact, it is my dream to create new educational system in order that I would see what things work in class and which ones don’t work.

I think I can be a valuable tool for your school because I consider myself a competent teacher who puts many hours of preparation for each class, and really cares about the progress of each individual student. Also, I can contribute with my knowledge of using technology in the classroom in order to make Spanish learning a fun, meaningful, and worthwhile experience for your students.

I am a very easy going person that gets along very well with both students and faculty, and I’m always ready to learn from other teachers’ techniques.

I greatly appreciate the time you have taken to read this letter, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards,

Jose Manuel Hernandez Gonzalez

Ejemplo de carta de presentación

Aquí tenéis un ejemplo de una carta de presentación o "cover letter".

Jan-29-13


José Manuel Hernández González
4125 N. 3250 W.
Lehi, UT 84109

To whom it might concern:

I’m a Masters student at Brigham Young University. I’m completing a Masters in Hispanic Linguistics. Right now I’m working on my thesis so that I can defend it this summer. I came across your job posting in the Internet, and I’m very interested in working as a Latin teacher at your school.

I completed my Bachelors in Classical Studies and Latin Teaching with a Minor in Spanish Teaching at Brigham Young University in 2011. Also, I completed my Student Teaching requirements at Maeser Preparatory in Lindon, where I taught seven and eight grade Latin and Spanish classes.

I’m very interested in work in your college. I have been working at university level for 3 years and I enjoy the environment. I believe that as a teacher you can make impact in their lives in the college level because I can help them to decide that Spanish culture and literature are one the best decision that they can make in their lives.

I think I can be a valuable tool for your school because I consider myself a competent teacher who puts many hours of preparation for each class, and really cares about the progress of each individual student. Also, I can contribute with my knowledge of using technology in the classroom in order to make Latin learning a fun, meaningful, and worthwhile experience for your students.

I am a very easy going person that gets along very well with both students and faculty, and I’m always ready to learn from other teachers’ techniques.

I greatly appreciate the time you have taken to read this letter, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards,

Jose Manuel Hernandez Gonzalez

Cartas de presentación

Durante las pasadas fechas hemos estado hablando bastante acerca de los emails de empresa. Quiero dedicar tiempo ahora al email de la carta de presentación.

Este email, no es lo mismo que un email normal para pedir trabajo. La carta de presentación es básicamente como un abstracto de tu tesis y que necesitas mandar por correo electrónico, por lo que, debes indicar en el email lo que tú consideras que es importante para el receptor.

Las cartas de presentación no se utilizan solo para adquirir un empleo, sino que son muy importantes para entrar en cualquier programa de máster y doctorado en Estados Unidos. Recomiendo que busquéis las "cover letter", que podáis encontrar para poder examinar las diferencias con un email normal.

Email de reclamación

Este es otro ejemplo de reclamación en un email que escribí para esta misma clase. Todos los emails que escribo son ejercicios míos hechos en clase para que podamos practicar y seguir las diferentes partes del email y reclamaciones. En este en concreto podemos ver lo directo que es, reclamando desde el primer momento cuál es el problema y qué es lo que se pide para resolver el problema.

1107 East South Temple

Phone: (801) 7175148

Fax: (801) 5148872 Web: www.aloc.com

July 10, 2007

Mr. Patrick Dwiggens, Operations Manager

Premier Wood Products

P.O. Box 528

High Point, NC 27261

Dear Mr. Dwiggens

I would like my money back, because I am very disappointed with the desk I purchased from your company.

I also believe I should be reimbursed for the charges. The advertisement in your catalogue describes the desk as a “North American white oak desk embellished with hand-inlaid walnut cross-banding.” The desk I received was completely unsatisfactory. The wood finish is rough, the grain is splotchy, and many of the drawers are difficult to pull out.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely

Jose Manuel Hernandez

President

Espaciado en el email

Observa que en este email se denota claramente el espaciado en un email comercial. El espacio en las diferentes formas está muy estructurado. Si alguno de estos espacios no se crea, el email no está bien ejecutado. Vemos lo minucioso que supone que debe ser un email formal en inglés. 

Jul 16, 2015

Sheryl Kiklas

All-World Travel Agency

440 East Broadway

New York, NY 10014

Dear Ms. Kiklas:

Carnival is pleased with the faithfulness of your company. We promote fun at the sea and pitching, discos on-board, swimming, and parties for all kind of costumers. We are confident that our cruises are the most attractive in the world. We have over a million people a year from all over the world. Close to 98 percent of our guests they get satisfied.

Because certain Travel agents have complaints of “drunken and loud behavior” of some teenagers; my company has increased the limit age of drinking from 18 to 21. Also, no teenager under 21 may travel unless accompanied by an adult over 25. We are hope that all our customers will be pleased with our service.

Our company would like to continue in business focusing more in family packages than in students. We will continue having fun cruises, sunny trips and will go to exotic ports that will remove the stresses of everyday life for our costumers.

I will call you during the week of January 5th to help you plan special family tour packages.

Sincerely,

Jose Manuel Hernandez

Customer Service

jmh

Enclosure

Email tú eres la empresa

Vamos a suponer que en vez de escribir a una compañía, tú eres la compañía y quieres ganarte a los clientes. ¿Qué harías para conseguir más clientela? Observa este email y marca las diferentes partes que hemos aprendido en clase. 

Jul 16, 2016

Jacob Jackson

Beech Grove Electronics

3590 Plainfield Road

Indianapolis, IN 46296

Dear Mr. Jackson:

My company is pleased that you are interested in acquiring T-Mobile Nokia digital phones. We are confident in our products and have all kind of phones with the highest technology.

I understand that you want a phone with full-color LCD, multimedia player, speaker phone, and voice mailing. We have been studying your credit for approval. We would like to do business with everyone but we are concerned about the risk, so we want to be really sure that each of our buyers have enough credibility.

I personally spoke with Pat Huckabee, my credit manager, and he told me that we can accept cash from your company. My company generally offers a credit to applicants referred to us by the credit-reporting service, and we are encouraged to investigate our customers’ credit record.

I suggest you acquire small number of phones. If you pay in cash, you can receive 2 percent of discount. After you have sold your fast-moving units, you can place another cash order through your toll-free order number. With our fast delivery system, the inventory will never be depleted. You can purchase the cameras right now or overnight.

Thank you for your interest. I hope you will continue to trust in our services.

Sincerely,

Jose Manuel Hernandez

CellCity Sales Manager

jmh

Enclosure

Email de negocios

En una de mis clases, me hicieron aprender a escribir emails comerciales. Era una clase muy interesante pero muy difícil al mismo tiempo. Este es un ejemplo de un ejercicio que tuve que hacer para esta clase. Esta carta es muy concisa y siempre usando los términos que se necesitan usar para negocios. 

July 10, 2007

Mr. Daryl Black

629 Massachusetts Avenue

Cambridge, MA 02139

Dear Mr. Black

Patagonia uses SmartTrack to scan incoming resumes.  To achieve good results, please follow these guidelines:

• Send original resume
• Use only white paper
• Use one sided 8 ½ x 11-inch paper
• Use plain, readable fonts such as Helvetica or Arial in a 10- to 14-point font
• Avoid using graphics, shading, italic, underlining, horizontal and vertical lines, parentheses, and brackets
• Avoid folding  or staple resumes
• Use nouns and phrases that highlight technical and professional expertise

Best wishes on your submission.

Sincerely

Kendra Woods

Ejemplo de email de trabajo

Hace unos meses escribí este email para un trabajo en Inglaterra. Si observamos el email podemos ver qué tipo de email es y que las características que hemos expuesto en el escrito son las mismas. 

To whom it may concern, 

My name is Jose Hernandez. I am a certified teacher working in USA. I am originally from Spain and I have the permit to work in UK. I attached my resume in case you are interested. 

THank you for  your time. 

Mr. Hernandez

Contestación de la persona que recibió el email:

Dear Jose:

Thank you for your expression of interest in the Head of Classics position advertised.

Please find attached the application pack and guidance notes for its completion. The closing date for applications is Monday 9 May 2016 and interviews will take place on Wednesday 18 May 2016.

If you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me.

El final de un email es muy formal. En inglés siempre se acaba con:

Sincerely,

Tú nombre: José M. Hernández

Este tipo de fórmulas hacen que sea muy fácil tanto empezar como terminar una carta formal, email o reclamación puesto que siempre es lo mismo.

A veces se escribe la palabra ENCLOSURE para advertir a la otra persona que tenemos en este email algún documento adjunto.